전화영어숙제

What is the most important thing in the world?

세상에서 제일 중요한것은 사랑이다. 물론 엄청 진부한 얘기지만, 나는 그게 세상을 돌아가게 한다고 믿는다. 우리가 남을 돕는것은 인류애에 기반한 것이고, 채식주의자나 동물보호운동 또한 동물에대한 사랑을 기반으로 하는 것이다. 어떤사람들은 돈이 제일 중요하다고하지만 그것 또한 돈에대한 사랑이라고 볼수 있다, 어떤것을 좋아하고, 그것을 얻기위해 노력하는것으로 이 세상은 돌아가고있다. 
마찬가지로 나는 나 자신을 사랑하고, 그렇기때문에 나에게 더 나은것, 더 나은 경험들을 주기위해 호주로 간다. 
이렇게 어떤것에 대한것이든, 사랑이 이세상을 움직이는 기본 바탕이 되기 때문에 사랑이 세상에서 가장 중요하다. 

 

The most important thing in the world is love. Of course It's too trite, but I believe it makes word go on. Help someone is based on humanity, vegitarians or animal rights groups are based on love of animals. Some people say money is most important, but It can be seem love of money. Like something, and trying to get them is make the word go on.

Likewise I love myself, so I go to Austrailia to give better things, and better experience to myself. 

So whatever it is about, love is the most important thing in the world because love is the basis for moving the world.

 

첨삭

The most important thing in the world is love. Of course It's too trite, but I believe it makes word = the world go on. Help someone is based on humanity, vegitarians = and vegetarians or animal rights groups are based on love of animals. Some people say money is the most important, but It can be seem = seen as love of =for money. Like something, and trying to get them is make the world go on.
Likewise I love myself, so I go to Austrailia to give better things, and better experience to myself.
So whatever it is about, love is the most important thing in the world because love is the basis for moving the world.

 

헐 미친 world에 왜 다 l 빼먹엇짘ㅋㅋㅋ창피쓰 ㅠ